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  • katie11/4/2010

    i really like dhis poem becuz it reminds me of alot of thangs when i read it. . .

  • Carmen Magnolia9/19/2010

    Excellent.

  • Langley Cornwell2/3/2010

    Fantastic, I love the alliteration - it works so naturally in this poem.

  • T. Hillukka12/28/2009

    The alliteration has a nice effect...

  • Lady Samantha12/17/2009

    I enjoyed this! :)

  • J.C. JORDAN12/17/2009

    Great poem.

  • Jason Gallagher12/17/2009

    I love to use alliterations as well, cool poem too.

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