Sights to See

Thomas Cleveland Lane

I was a college sophomore
when first I peered at bodies far away
through a telescope. Not a big
gigantic thing, a structure unto itself,
but it would do. For what we sought to find,
it would do just fine.

On that chilly autumn night I saw
the rings of Saturn and the
craters of the moon,
still devoid of human tread.

You're dating yourself the poet's muse
reminded him before he could
strike the next key. That's
all right, replied the receptacle,
I'm a cheap date.

I thought the sights I saw
deep in the October night
were spectacular and, to my
brief history, unique.

The next day dawned, bright
and crisp, the very best of autumn's lot.
I looked upon the panoply of hues,
busy dying upon the trees, and
then it came to me.

This, too, had a wonder of its own.
For all my fascination
with the dark and barren forms beyond
the business end of the lens,
nothing on the rocks I saw
could ever conceive of this.


Published by Thomas Cleveland Lane

I am a semi-retired freelance writer (willing to take on new clients). I work in local (Montgomery County, Md.) theater at the amateur and non-union level. When I don t have an onstage gig, I go to piano bar...  View profile

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  • Ali Canary11/28/2011

    Cool! At first I was expecting the bodies you were peering at to be of the co-ed variety, but you went and got all serious...great work!

  • Dan Reveal10/30/2011

    I agree with Orchiolum. Your poetry is wonderful!!! A nice journey to go on..:)

  • Donald Pennington10/27/2011

    Brilliant!

  • Orchiolum10/22/2011

    Perhaps you might consider writing more poetry...your words brought memories of decades passed, then returned me to the beauty beyond my windows. Enjoyed the journey.

  • Allene Newberg Bilodeau10/20/2011

    Amen to that, Thomas! Autumn's glorious celebration of the trees before consigning itself to winter's sleep has to be one of the most simple radiant happenings anywhere in the universe. Loved the way to came to this youthful dawning. Beautiful.

  • Patti Walden10/20/2011

    How true!

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