Some Friendly Advice to the Lovelorn

Shirley A Mandel
So,

he left you

because time

has worked rings

around your waist.

And now your limbs

are bowed low

by a lonely wind.

Well,

don't just stand there

and crack-up.

Do something for you:

take a class,

write a poem or

make a new friend,

or do all three.

New buds

can sprout

from an older tree.

Published by Shirley A Mandel

Shirley A. Mandel is an award winning poet and the author of two books.. In addition to being a writer, Shirley Ann is a Vietnam vintage veteran and served her fellow veterans in the VA medical system as...  View profile

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  • Nary Pung8/31/2009

    I like this poem. It is short but sweet and very well worded. New buds can't sprout from an old tree! Yes they can!

  • Tiadora Anderson7/31/2009

    I will not look at old trees the same way again.

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper7/30/2009

    Oh, so sad but so strong, lovely :)

  • Dee Davis7/22/2009

    This is very powerful. Thanks once again for sharing.

  • Sheryl Young7/21/2009

    Nice! I like the line "Time has worked rings around your waist".

  • Langley Cornwell7/20/2009

    I love this. Indeed, new buds can sprout from an older tree!

  • Branwen667/20/2009

    Uplifting!

  • Linda Louise Johnson7/19/2009

    Ilike the "rings around your waist" --welll actually I don't like them, but you know what I mean. Good poem.

  • Siew Cheng Hoe7/19/2009

    simple and nice

  • Malina Debrie7/19/2009

    Okay...................

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