Soul Riff

Demetria Dixon
I traverse the light, trying to find my way
I stumble through the night seeking the day

Poised on the precipice and slowly losing ground
Slipping, toppling, falling without even a sound

My heart breaks, shards tinkling like fine crystal
My soul snaps and it only makes a whisper

Published by Demetria Dixon

I am a stand up comedian and a writer. I have committed myself to this path and opened myself to the future. I plan to eat, sleep, breath and be it.  View profile

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  • Angel K.Y. Chau7/2/2008

    Beautiful and wonderful!

  • Demetria Dixon7/2/2008

    Thank you all for you kind comments.

  • Raymond M. III Grant7/2/2008

    Great poetry! sound like you've had your heart broken a time or two.

  • 3lilangels7/1/2008

    very powerful nice job!!!!!!!!!!!

  • R. Elizabeth C. Kitchen7/1/2008

    Excellent choice of words

  • PenPress7/1/2008

    very nicely written poem !..........

  • Demetria Dixon6/30/2008

    Thanks everyone for stopping by to read my work. I am grateful.

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA6/30/2008

    I always enjoy your article, very interesting work !

  • Genie Walker6/30/2008

    Powerful imagery!

  • Mr. New Material6/30/2008

    great selection of words Demetria!

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