Sparkling Blue Eyes

Coffee Mugg

My eyes close I see you,
radiant that you are,
I reach out I touch you,
so soft so sublime,
you reach for me,
your words your whispers in the dark,
we know what they are,
you drift further away,
things were so perfect,
you are fading,
dimmer and dimmer,
this can be reborn,
I don't want to loose you,
you are gone.

EXHALE

Published by Coffee Mugg

I am a 60 year old male, born and raised in Alabama. Have been in construction most of adult life, and had lived in Orlando Fl for over 30 years. Have now come back to Alabama. Could be considered an expert...  View profile

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  • Kady Burney12/19/2007

    I know I've said this before, but the ending of theis does snag your readers. It makes you go back and reread again! Great job here, Ken.

    Words like: sublime, dimmer, whisper....I LOVE!!!!

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