Spring (a Cinquain)

Tina Twito
(Thanks Harriet Steinberg) for the push to try this form again! Fun form to revisit.

Spring
Creative, destructive
Thawing, quenching, flooding
Long awaited green herald
Beginning

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • K.M. Stockton7/15/2011

    This flowed very well.

  • Delicia Powers2/27/2011

    Each word is a poem to itself, the contrast was a master stroke, and very spring like, wonderful poem!

  • J L Carey Jr2/25/2011

    Really nicely done. I can't wait for spring to get here. I like the contrasting or conflicting elements of the "Creative, destructive" line also. It has a kiss me kill me flavor to it. &)

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky2/23/2011

    Good one!

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan2/22/2011

    Second line is food for thought. Every development in life and turn in weather is creative and destructive. It is up to us. We learn from mistakes or curse our luck to get back at society. Scienfic development is likewise. Nice effort, Tina - siva

  • Dan Reveal2/22/2011

    Great work, Tina!!!

  • Tony Payne2/22/2011

    Very good.

  • Sheryl Young2/22/2011

    Nice job! Spring brings a breath of fresh air.

  • Martin Kloess2/21/2011

    very well done

  • Grace Anne Carey2/21/2011

    I like the "creative, destructive" line. With everything flourishing in the spring it's easy to forget how damaging the winds, rains and floods can be.

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