Stilldead (You Deserve)

Dom Coccaro
I'm a spontaneous abortion

I would give the blood in my gut

To palliate the burden

Mollify the mother

But I'm here now

Never should have been

I'm a coffin birth

Open source of distention

More than it's worth

Misgivings of the mother

I would do anything to give your life back to you

You don't know how much it kills me

But I'm here now

Never should have been

Clumsy grief cried into your chest

Void of strength to lift my head

As soon as you let go, I'll fall apart

I'll fall apart

As soon as you let go, I'll fall apart

I'll fall apart

Published by Dom Coccaro

I'm a freelance writer specializing in reviewing cult oddities, analyzing geeky subjects, and tossing my worthless opinion into the machine.  View profile

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  • Walton S. Tissot11/4/2009

    Well done! Good form.

  • Charles Odom4/20/2009

    Dark stuff! Powerful!

  • Dan Reveal2/19/2009

    Good images.

  • Lucky M. Diaz2/11/2009

    Dark but very descriptive imagery.

  • Nikki2/10/2009

    brutal and raw imagery

  • J P Whickson2/10/2009

    Wow. Very emotional.

  • Linda StCyr2/10/2009

    Disturbingly poignant... I liked it.

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