Subtle

Robert O. Adair
Thank you
for your subtle hint!
Subtle,
like a charging rhinoceros,
like a battering ram,
like a herd of stampeding wild elephants,
like a sewer when it backs up,
like a the fragrance of an excited skunk!
You know,
Subtle!

Published by Robert O. Adair

Robert has spent over 50 years doing extensive study, writing, teaching and research. Robert s poetry has appeared in several poetry anthologies including Norma s Garden, seven chapbooks, and such journals a...  View profile

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  • Ali Canary4/7/2010

    Just the picture and the title made me giggle before I even read the poem. Very subtle! :)

  • R.C. Johnson3/30/2010

    Yes, we all recognize subtle -- very descriptive!

  • Fern Fischer3/29/2010

    Oh, I needed a smile! Thanks :o)

  • leroy coffie3/29/2010

    funny. I actually had a sewer back up into my bathtub one tub and it filled the tub up. What a horrible week that was.

  • Allana Calhoun (Tink)3/24/2010

    Some people NEED a rhinoceros sized Subtle hint!

  • Nancy V Canfield3/23/2010

    A sewer backing up??? LOL!! Subtle!

  • Sheryl Young3/23/2010

    God is sometimes that still, small voice and other times a roaring thunder!

  • Nita Mukherjee3/23/2010

    Well said!

  • Theresa Wiza3/23/2010

    Funny poem to start my day. Thanks!

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky3/23/2010

    Subtle? People can be subtle? Where? When? I must have missed it.

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