Summer Lovin'

Cindi Starr
Cindi Starr, Yahoo! Contributor Network
May 24, 2008 "Share your voice on Yahoo! websites. Start Here."
I still feel your auburn hair
As I caress it with my fingers.
and your attitude of "I don't care",
Yet your essence lingers.

When the brutality of your love
Left me weak and weeping,
I somehow held my head above,
Despite the fear of sinking.

Published by Cindi Starr

As a full time writer, I have a thirst for knowledge of all types. I am a published poet, and have published feature articles, and short fiction in print media. I write devotionals and historical romance f...  View profile

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  • Restaurant Chef7/23/2008

    NICE~!

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper6/26/2008

    Sad, but so positive :) Sheri

  • Tyler Mills6/12/2008

    Nice poem.

  • Samantha Beck5/29/2008

    This is great! Btw--were you channeling "Grease" when you the title? That's what it made me think of when I first saw it lol

  • Joshua McMorrow-Hernandez5/26/2008

    A profound and moving piece....

  • Donna Thacker5/25/2008

    So many feelings in so few words...I felt the sadness

  • marindavid5/25/2008

    Brief - poignant - lyrical and lovely.

  • Donna Porter5/25/2008

    Much heart said in few words, wonderful job Cindi.

  • Nurses Naturally5/25/2008

    Sad.Been there.

  • Linda Ann Nickerson5/25/2008

    Hope in heartbreak. Well done . . . with an economy of words. ;-)

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