Summer sunlight produces warm and thoughtful rays,
All the while kids play in the cool, refreshing lake water.
I watch with a smile as this time is relished and enjoyed.
We all remember those carefree days we enjoyed
Whilst the warmth of sun cast down its strong rays.
My brother and I would run inside for a cold glass of water.
Kids spend oodles of their time playing in pool water,
And that is something as an adult I have enjoyed.
I still delight in the radiant sunlight and its rays.
Sun rays trickle over water and shall always be enjoyed.
All the while kids play in the cool, refreshing lake water.
I watch with a smile as this time is relished and enjoyed.
We all remember those carefree days we enjoyed
Whilst the warmth of sun cast down its strong rays.
My brother and I would run inside for a cold glass of water.
Kids spend oodles of their time playing in pool water,
And that is something as an adult I have enjoyed.
I still delight in the radiant sunlight and its rays.
Sun rays trickle over water and shall always be enjoyed.
Published by Julie Wimmer
Julie worked in tv/film for years. She now works part time instructing preschool gym and fitness classes at a local YMCA. She also has traveled around the US and has a good sense and knowlege of different st... View profile
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10 Comments
Post a CommentFun tritina.
Drink lots of water and use sunscreen!
Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
Wonderful....BTW thanks for your comments on my sports articles.
Don't forget the sunscreen! :)
Very descriptive and realistic~
awesome!
super job
Picturesque writing.
Beautifully written, cheers ;)