Surfing

*Shell*
Intense emotion through veins and body,
step by step immense preparation.

Slowly trudging down the soft grainy floor of open intensity,
awaiting the right moment to explore the open watery world of the unfamiliar.

Gliding through the cool heavy substance,
beginning to attempt the overpowering element.

Arising at the last moment with excitement

Only to be ridden back to shore, as quickly as the adventure was initiated.

Published by *Shell*

A young mother of 1 and expecting. Currently a stay at home mother enjoying the time spent with her son and husband and working on freelance writing, and freelance transcription.  View profile

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  • Greg Seltz7/11/2010

    I remember my last moment...going face first into the ocean haha...good article..

  • *Shell*6/19/2010

    Thank you so much Carla!

  • Carla M. Swinke6/19/2010

    Excellent! :)

  • *Shell*6/19/2010

    Thanks Jack :)

  • Jack Wellman6/19/2010

    Wow. THis reminds me of a water park near here that has a wave machine and lets you surf. Sounds like wonderful hot summer day acitivity and your giftedness in writing continues to amaze me and not only me! Look, the comments are piling up friend.

  • *Shell*6/19/2010

    Thanks peter

  • Peter Sereduke6/19/2010

    very cool. reminds me of the boogie board

  • *Shell*6/19/2010

    Thanks delicia, and David, that would make it much easier!

  • Delicia Powers6/19/2010

    Never have surfed,your poem made it seem like and adventure. Well done!:0)

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW6/19/2010

    I'm a body surfing guy... no board to wax!

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