We attempted to contact my sister who was working in D.C. The lines were jammed with frantic calls, but after an hour I got through. She was safe, and could see the smoke at the Pentagon from her office window. I told her that I loved her.
The next day I drove to my mother's house, my childhood home, and sat with her in the swing on the porch. The sky was blue and silent except for the occasional songbird and military jet passing overhead. Mom turned to me and said, "I wish things could be the way they were." Sadness and longing permeated her voice, and I knew exactly what she meant and how she felt. On that day, her world seemed less safe, less sure, more savage, and forever changed. I never forgave Osama bin Laden for bringing that fear and shadow to my mother's eyes.
My mother passed away in 2006. This morning, I did not dance, I did not cheer, I did not celebrate. I simply whispered, "he's gone mom."
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Post a CommentSuch a moving piece. I lost my mother prior to 9/11, and it was a blessing in that I did not have to see her gentle soul torn like that. Thank you for this lovely work!
Yes, you touched the chord. My mom never said it, but I know she thought it until the end, "I wish things could go back." Our world is a different place now. You have captured that feeling here.
I can relate to lamenting those times when things felt more stable - love the endings you do - they're effervescent
this grasped me with a type of visual landscape. your words are so nicely crafted and tuned, i really hope you begin publishing new work on here for everyone to read. and also, thank you very much for all the comments you left me, it means alot to me :) gives me that extra push to continue writing. peace to you good soul, take care, and drink plenty of water :D
Powerfully insightful!
Thanks so much for sharing this. Very moving in more way than one.
The subtle ending really wowed me - so powerful.
Beautiful.
The feelings of your mother resonates within us all after the event that changed the world for the worse. It will take a long time indeed "for things could be the way they were". What a legacy that Osama has left! - siva
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