Tell Me What You See

Louisa Burgess

Tell me what you see
now that your eyes are open.
Mom's face is smiling.

What else do you see
with eyes as deep as the sea.
Dad's pride is showing.

Can you see the love
from all of us around you.
Pouring in to you.

Be still and happy
new and precious baby boy.
You're going home soon.

Published by Louisa Burgess

Life long NYer. Expressing myself through the written word has been my lifelong hobby and vocation. Somehow I managed to raise two sons and actually worked for a living! Recently moved to Texas!Louisa Burges...  View profile

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  • Baconator6/12/2008

    I am all caught up with you! Wooo hooo!!! Great reads! Thank you!

  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock5/18/2008

    Wonderful job on this one too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Christine Bruness5/15/2008

    Lovely...Dylan sounds beautiful!

  • Judy Shubert5/14/2008

    What a beautiful poem.

  • 3lilangels5/14/2008

    Awesome news and wonderful poem, great!!!!!!!!!

  • PenPress5/13/2008

    great poem to celebrate the good news !........................enjoy the new role !................

  • Louisa3645/13/2008

    aww ty for the sentiments :)

  • Tony Vega5/13/2008

    I see a FANTASTIC poem embracing new life and the love of mom & dad. Wonderful!

  • Nikki5/13/2008

    awesome news!!!!!

  • memmay1515/13/2008

    Good news...Wonderful ! Save this for him.

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