That man, I;
Thirteen months ago
in a cold, dingy tenement reached
by the climb of rickety stair,
a man stood at the counter
drinking milk - chocolate -
unaided, unstrawed; the first time
in twenty-one years.
This - this he knows
is real - really happened -
he caught it
on film.
Over-filled with joy -
like the seven year old boy
showing a man
he could ride a bike -
he waited for the woman
to return home.
He showed that man - "that
is nice." he said. He showed
that woman - "that
is nice." she said.
A man sits on the kitchen floor,
Brachial, Sciatic, choked by clenching
neck, shoulder; hip and back wander
between fire and numbing cold;
mixes shortbread, remembers
those lost days;
"That is nice."
they said.
(letter to a friend :: January 19, 2010)
Thirteen months ago
in a cold, dingy tenement reached
by the climb of rickety stair,
a man stood at the counter
drinking milk - chocolate -
unaided, unstrawed; the first time
in twenty-one years.
This - this he knows
is real - really happened -
he caught it
on film.
Over-filled with joy -
like the seven year old boy
showing a man
he could ride a bike -
he waited for the woman
to return home.
He showed that man - "that
is nice." he said. He showed
that woman - "that
is nice." she said.
A man sits on the kitchen floor,
Brachial, Sciatic, choked by clenching
neck, shoulder; hip and back wander
between fire and numbing cold;
mixes shortbread, remembers
those lost days;
"That is nice."
they said.
(letter to a friend :: January 19, 2010)
Published by Brendan W Vittum
Brendan W Vittum is a self-styled Poet, Author, Philosopher, Photographer, Graphic Designer, and Hardware & Software Specialist whose experience spans more than 25 years. His works have been published in a v... View profile
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6 Comments
Post a CommentThanks Brendan :) Best to you too.
Those words Effi, are the better poem methinks! ;-)
distracted responses it seems, failing to grasp the significance of the moment...
Vivid indeed. ;-)
Thank you my Friend.
wonderfully worded and visually vivid