Should we paint the walls of your womb each time,
or have the seams been broken with a smile?
You can choose to remember the hurt from that fall,
but it's the baby's cry that makes it all worthwhile.
Should we confide in that watered-down money,
or have those attic works of art become your make believe bed?
You can choose to remember the hurt from that fall,
but it's the baby's cry upon which your love is shed.
It's the baby's cry upon which your love is shed.
For I am convinced it was that soft voice
that made me feel so much less betrayed.
You can be so proud to have such a friend,
the one who left with the wind when others might have stayed.
And what's to become of that green pasture bracelet dream,
when your best efforts are but the hand of a milk-fed sea?
You can choose to remember the hurt from that fall,
while I lower my glasses and say, "It's only me."
While I lower my glasses and say, "It's only me."
"It's only me."
For I am convinced it was that soft voice
that made me feel so much less betrayed.
You can be so proud to have such a friend,
the one who left with the wind when others might have stayed.
or have the seams been broken with a smile?
You can choose to remember the hurt from that fall,
but it's the baby's cry that makes it all worthwhile.
Should we confide in that watered-down money,
or have those attic works of art become your make believe bed?
You can choose to remember the hurt from that fall,
but it's the baby's cry upon which your love is shed.
It's the baby's cry upon which your love is shed.
For I am convinced it was that soft voice
that made me feel so much less betrayed.
You can be so proud to have such a friend,
the one who left with the wind when others might have stayed.
And what's to become of that green pasture bracelet dream,
when your best efforts are but the hand of a milk-fed sea?
You can choose to remember the hurt from that fall,
while I lower my glasses and say, "It's only me."
While I lower my glasses and say, "It's only me."
"It's only me."
For I am convinced it was that soft voice
that made me feel so much less betrayed.
You can be so proud to have such a friend,
the one who left with the wind when others might have stayed.
Published by Dan Reveal
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21 Comments
Post a CommentI agree with Jack! Great one Dan!
Keeping friends is so important. Great poetry.
Dan, I never have the words. Of course, I am not as eloquent as you are.
Amazing word weaving-as always!
excellent writing
Beautifully eloquent, deeply expressive, and wonderfully poetic. Thanks!
Great writing, my friend. Whenever reading your materials, I expect nothing less. You capture the essense of live with such vivid imagery. Thanks.
Really beautiful and emotive. I like what the others have said.
Wonderful!
Wow! Amazing and deep! :-) Loved the photo with!