Thawed Out

Tina Twito
Amazing rush, rejoicing,
in a land still locked in snow.
The outside may say "winter",
but the inside whispers "no".

The crush of slush beneath my feet,
no ice to break away.
I'll let the sun touch on my skin
if only for today!

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Marie Lowe3/5/2011

    We dipped down to -25 last month, cold for Oklahoma.

  • Bethany R. Marsh2/17/2011

    Excellent, as always! : )

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan2/15/2011

    We shall overcome! Nice thoughts, Tina - siva

  • J L Carey Jr2/14/2011

    Really well done. I liked the "crush of slush" &).

  • Marie Saxton2/14/2011

    Very nice, loved it!

  • Dan Reveal2/13/2011

    This is great, Tina!!!

  • Sharon Pfohl2/13/2011

    The snow may make the world look beautiful but I'll stay in Florida.

  • Becky Whittemore2/12/2011

    Nice! We are getting a break from the deep freeze here finally. Looking forward to Spring in a few weeks!

  • Delicia Powers2/12/2011

    lovely!

  • Dan Reveal2/12/2011

    I really like this, Tina!

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