The Art of Soccer

*Shell*
Swiftly gliding down the narrow guarded path,
although protected, fear is in the air.

Direction and speed passes through the mind,
as the adrenaline rushes with the bodies quick movements.

Ability to breath fresh and new is almost impossible,
Time is of little presence.

Focus now on the ahead achievement,
zig, zag, bam, kick!

Success!!!!!!

Published by *Shell*

A young mother of 1 and expecting. Currently a stay at home mother enjoying the time spent with her son and husband and working on freelance writing, and freelance transcription.  View profile

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  • *Shell*6/9/2010

    It is perhaps a double meaning poem

  • Delicia Powers6/9/2010

    Great movement, flowing troughout the poem, well done!

  • Peter Sereduke6/5/2010

    great poem...well done

  • Carla M. Swinke6/4/2010

    Well done! Succcess of your own :)

  • *Shell*6/4/2010

    Thank you Jack! My Fiancee Loves soccor and played it in his youth.

  • Jack Wellman6/4/2010

    Great work and you nailed it exactly Michelle. It is soccer to the "T". My tween loves soccer even thou this year her team went 1-5, she still had a blast. Good work, as always my gifted friend.

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