The Blue Rose

Lisa R. Strong
She cries alone at night;
In her flower bed alone;
Tears fall like summer rain;
Her tender heart broken;
She misses the warmth;
Of the summer sun;
Her sadness deepens;
Where is her lover now?
Is he with another rose?
She wonders why he left;
If her fragrance was too strong;
Or her thorns too sharp;
Was she not soft enough?
Her petals turn to blue;
Waiting for his return

Published by Lisa R. Strong

I was born and raised in Binghamton NY. I have been writing short stories since I was eight years old, and poetry since I was a teenager. I also write prayers, meditations, and opinion articles. My dre...  View profile

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  • Charles Reynolds2/3/2008

    Agree whole heartedly with the imagery comments. Wonderful use of language and comparison. Thank you for another beautiful addition to the world of art.

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA1/25/2008

    Bitter sweet, but very nice.

  • Brett Davison1/24/2008

    It's been over half-a-year now since I found out my angel was going out with someone else...she's in college now and I sometimes wonder if I still have some measure of existence in her life. If her sister wasn't still in high school, would she even know if I died?

  • Mary E. Coe1/24/2008

    Loved it.

  • Coffee Mugg1/24/2008

    Ah the mysterious "Blue Rose", let us hope she will not be afraid to love again, as there are many roses in a garden of roses. true love can spring up at any moment, then there will be no more cloudy days, just beautiful spring time rain. another wonderful write Miss Lisa. Ken

  • Karen1/24/2008

    So sweetly sad. Lovely imagery, original connection of lovelessness and a blue rose. Well done indeed Lisa.

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