The Celebration of Indonesia: Purnama Dan Mentari

Kady Burney and Harry Gunawan Friendly Poetic Duel

Harry Gunawan
suatu hari ibu dan ayah memutuskan untuk pergi
ibu ke barat menjadi purnama, ayah ke timur menjadi mentari
kemudian mereka bersinar menerangi setiap langkahku
silih berganti, selamanya, selalu

February 26, 2008

NOTE:
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Kady came up with this great idea of having friendly poetic duel between her and I which is then called "The Celebration of Indonesia." I thought this would be so much fun so I agreed with her immediately. ^_^
The goal is to translate each other's Indonesian poems to English as accurate as possible. "Purnama Dan Mentari" is the title of my Indonesian poem for her.
Here are the terms:

Terms of agreement between Kady and Harry:
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1. We both write an Indonesian poem and translate it to English
2. The poem should be just one stanza, no more than 4 lines.
3. No time limit. We submit our English translation whenever we are ready.
4. Winner is the one who translates the closest to the meaning or the message that we try to convey.
5. We rate each other by commenting and use percent as the measurement.
6. Most of all. Have a fun translating! :-D

To those who want to know Kady's response and my rating of her translation, please check out Kady Burney's CP page more often.
Also, you can read her article Harry Gunawan and Kady Burney's Friendly Poetic Duel to know more about it.
Thank you all my CP friends. :-)

Cheers,
Harry

Published by Harry Gunawan

A positive-minded person, stays and spends entire life mostly in Jakarta, capital city of Indonesia. Consider oneself as an (e)ntrepreneur and also an artist of life.  View profile

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  • jayanti raman1/10/2009

    Great post Harry Gunawan

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI8/29/2008

    Where is your new post?

  • sugeng5/9/2008

    har,
    it's touchy and memorable.... hiks...hiks

  • Steven West2/29/2008

    What a fun activity. Very creative.

  • Chris M. Carmichael2/29/2008

    a poetic duel! what a great idea!

  • Harriet Steinberg2/28/2008

    Sounds like fun for eveybody

  • jcorn2/28/2008

    I keep checking back to see how this plays out...
    :)

  • Justice Lives Not2/27/2008

    Great idea. I can't wait to see how this unfolds!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA2/27/2008

    Very interesting job, very nice.

  • Karen aka 2/26/2008

    Great fun. Can't wait to see this. Indonesian, wow, good luck to both. Let the poems begin. :))))))))))

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