The Human House

A Poem Based on an Object

J L Carey Jr
There is a squirrel

That sits on our

Back porch each day

Peering in with its

Strange brown eye,

Leering at the mayhem

That defines our lives.

Sometimes we sit as well,

The cold glass between us,

Pointing our fingers,

But the squirrel doesn't move

And I can see in its eye

That we're queer creatures

Of a self imposed zoo.

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

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  • Tina Twito9/20/2011

    I missed this one too! Great poem. We had a cardinal watch us daily a couple summers back. We joked that it was a spybot for the government. Maybe it will share intelligence with your squirrel. :) Seriously, I love the idea of the "self imposed zoo". Can definitely relate. Glad to find this one!

  • Walton S. Tissot7/20/2011

    cool! great poem... somehow i missed the notice

  • RipDiction7/16/2011

    who "really" watching who. like the concept.

  • Shirley Ann7/1/2011

    This is really good. I guess we can learn alot from animals. Sometimes I think they are the smart ones (or at least wise) and not us.

  • rama devi nina5/16/2011

    Love this! Brilliant.

  • Orchiolum5/4/2011

    As I approach the window the squirrels look at me with those beautiful, mysterious eyes, and continue to chomp the birdseed.

  • Patricia A. Ziegler5/4/2011

    I often wonder what those little critters really think of us. I'm sure they find us very strange, indeed!

  • Karen LoBello5/4/2011

    Love this.

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW5/4/2011

    We all build and live in little houses for ourselves... and some like to believe that someone greater than ourselves is watching us, as you watch the furry tailed rodent, from out a larger cosmic window.

  • Delicia Powers5/4/2011

    I often wonder which of us are the "untamed"...well done!

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