The Loss of a Loved One

Tara Darity
I am consumed with anger
I just want to cry
It won't go away
No matter how hard I try

The fact that he's gone
I still can't accept
So many times
I have sat and wept

Losing a parent
Is so very sad
I miss him terribly
He was a great Dad

Very hard to talk about
My eyes fill with tears
People don't understand
Not even my peers

Filled with emotions
Seems all the time
Trying to express myself
Through this rhyme

Published by Tara Darity

I am a stay at home mom. I am married and have three kids. I enjoy writing and photography.  View profile

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  • April Higney4/21/2010

    Very sorry for your loss. Its always difficult losing someone so loved. To think about the best moments in times of laughter and happiness of memories always helped to ease a bit in it for me in my losses. ~I hope you have many of those kinds of remembrances to help comfort. ~ Your writing tribute is beautiful. (and I'm sure he somehow knows)

  • Linda M. McCloud4/5/2010

    The anniversary of my father is coming up. He passed in 1992. Yet, not a day goes by that I do not miss him.

  • Bobbi Johnson4/1/2010

    I can relate to this poem, it's well written. My dad died last September and I would give up anything I owned to hug him one more time.

  • R.C. Johnson3/31/2010

    Glad that you can express these feelings through poetry, and hope that is helpful for you.

  • Kent Tompkins3/31/2010

    Excellent poem. Sorry about your lost and you keep being the great writer that you are! - Kent

  • Z.J. Ascensio3/30/2010

    Beautiful and heartfelt poem. I'm very sorry for your loss.

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW3/30/2010

    any of we who are older can't help but wonder how our loss will impact those we leave behind when our time comes. I wonder how your dad would feel about your feelings. Losing a loved one is an unequaled trauma for most of us... en Espanol, lo siento.

  • M. M. Rooni3/30/2010

    Tara I am sorry for you loss. Sending lots of prayers your way.

  • Shane Smith3/29/2010

    Beautiful poem. It must have been hard to share.

  • Marie Lowe3/28/2010

    Lost my dad at 15 to cancer, now I have to go through the cancer thing with my mother, I know about the anger.

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