what good is the morning if I don't see that you've gone?
Please save a little time just for me,
and I will lay down my life to make it right when I was wrong.
Sit by me closer during those darkened theater times,
and I will promise to care about how you feel.
Of course we can share in the chocolate soda fountain kiss,
but it's your love that makes it all so real.
And those who make the loudest noise
are too afraid to trust a softer side.
Please forgive this mortal man that means to be good,
and my love for you is the thing I won't try to hide.
Can you mend my jeans by tomorrow,
or will they always be too far gone?
Falling in love is not something that has to be learned,
but is like a little bird that sings its song.
Falling in love is not something that has to be learned,
but is like a little bird that sings its song.
And those who make the loudest noise
are too afraid to trust a softer side.
Please forgive this mortal man that means to be good,
and my love for you is the thing I won't try to hide.
For Dina Sullivan
{Picture courtesy of Mike Oberg}
Published by Dan Reveal
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26 Comments
Post a CommentVery nice indeed!
You're such a romantic!
So interesting....:-) Great poem, my friend. Excellent photo with. Enjoyed.
The love shines.
Exceptional! Dinal will love it!
Nice!
very beautiful
Wow! Definitely going to share this one....
Dan, beautiful expression of love, Dina deserves a guy like you!!!
You write with such elegance and beauty, Dan. I'm sure Dina will be deeply touched when she reads this.