The breeze danced with
the weeping willows while I
quietly recalled the exact
details of my plan.
With a gun in one hand,
and bear mace in the other,
I no longer felt weak.
I was a man.
Retreating to a dead bush just feet from the location of the mockingbird, I made sure my Red Ryder BB gun was loaded and ready to rid the world of the tomato stealing beast. I wasn't sure if the bear mace would be any help, but I attached it to my belt anyways. Besides, I wasn't about to let the miscreant get away without a fight.
Sweat from my eyebrow
dripped and fell,
onto a rock that was shaped
like a decapitated head.
My nerves were unsettled
and splattered with gray,
I wouldn't be satisfied
until the mockingbird was dead.
I stalked the bird from a hole in the bush that was decayed as a result of the summer heat. For ten minutes, I procrastinated the attack, but finally forced myself to make a move. Raising the gun and steadying it against my shoulder, I looked through the peep sight and aimed directly at the mockingbird's head.
My index finger was trembling
as I caressed the trigger,
and tried to calm myself
before I finally shot.
The bird was quite still
while my finger slipped
and the projectile was fired
but hit the mockingbird, not.
In a fit of rage, I charged the mockingbird at full speed. Fleeing from danger in an aggressive manner, the bird flew in a circle above my head as I batted my arms wildly. A wet and sticky substance landed on me, and I curled into a ball crying while the mockingbird sat in the bird house, squawking. He was also curled into a ball, mocking me.
Defeated, but not done.
This fight has just begun.
The mockingbird will not win,
I must find strength from within.
(Look for Part Two soon)
Published by Brandon Elliott
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26 Comments
Post a CommentGreat prose!
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This is so hawt.
Let's sex now, kay? Thanks
Well-written, but I think Ms. Harper Lee would be a littke uncomfortable with it.
This was great can't wait for more!
How originally done this is! Great job! Looking forward to the next one!
i love it dude ur great!!
it's fantastic. your an awesome writer(:
Awesome stuff (can't wait for Part 2)
that was an awesome story...i love it
Wow. Good job, mann. It was really, reallu well written.(: