The One You Yearn For: A Love Poem

Pine

H. Kris Thomas
Pine like the tree.
Like the needles that dance in the air;
On the wind.
Pine like the scent that's familiar
Even when it is not.
Like the icy chill of winter forgotten in Summer
And recalled in late Autumn.
Pine like the eagerness caught in your toes;
Felt in fleshy foot bottoms
And eager hips.
Pine like the electric air that is touching you and
Is touching the one who charged it
So that you could feel it--
So that you two could feel it.
Pine like withdrawals at goodbye--
Sad goodbye--
Terrible goodbye.
How can you go on without electric air--
And that familiar unfamiliarity that's been
Written in the space between you and the charge--
Between you and the one you yearn for?

Published by H. Kris Thomas

So Cal resident writing poetry and other things...but mostly poetry.  View profile

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  • Mike Powers6/3/2010

    You make the desire seem tangible. Wonderful work!

  • Mallory Collier4/26/2010

    Heavy piece, Heather! I think we can all relate. :)

  • Angela La Fon4/16/2010

    I love the way you used "pine" here. You are very talented.

  • Jan Corn4/11/2010

    Yearning can be so painful, especially in the face of loss. Excellent poem!

  • Dawn Fisher4/11/2010

    And that familiar unfamiliarity that's been
    Written in the space between you and the charge--
    Beautiful!

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW4/11/2010

    i think that the inevitable humanity of yearning is a key element in making us who we are - though it hurts, it keeps us grounded in being people together.

  • Walton S. Tissot4/9/2010

    COOL! Beautiful work

  • J.J4/8/2010

    That was way too awesome! I think.... Yes... Yes, I can feel the electricity from this poem! I must see more!

  • J L Carey Jr4/8/2010

    "How can you go on without electric air--
    And that familiar unfamiliarity that's been
    Written in the space between you and the charge--"
    That's awesome.

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