The Riptide

Donna Cavanagh
Life, at times, should post a sign
Warning: Dangerous Riptide Ahead
On the surface, the seas appear calm
But in the murky water, we must be able to tread

The rip current is so easily disguised
We often do not see the harm until it is too late
Then, we are left struggling to stay afloat
Trying to avoid a disastrous fate

But riptides can be conquered
We can break free from its iron grasp
If we ride it out the current without a sense of panic
The danger will fade and eventually pass

It is when we struggle against the tide
That we lose our stamina and then the fight
When we give up control; we gain control
We can wade through the darkness and into the light

We all have to take on our own riptides
Powerful forces that drown us in desperation
When we fight smart, we can beat the enemy
We win the battle with patience and determination

Published by Donna Cavanagh

I like to make people laugh. My newest humor book "Reality: Fantasy's Evil Twin" is now available on Amazon. My other humor book "Life on the Off Ramp" and my poetry book "Poems for a Positive Day II" were...  View profile

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  • Debbie Gavazzi9/11/2010

    Catching up on July articles. PV Love.

  • Missy H.7/30/2010

    Well said

  • Delicia Powers7/30/2010

    Such and uplifting poem, thanks:0)

  • Fran Brockmyre7/29/2010

    I haven't encountered a riptide in quite a while and that has me worried.

  • Mike Powers7/29/2010

    Beautifully written!

  • Darrin Atkins7/28/2010

    great work on this. :)

  • Patricia A. Ziegler7/28/2010

    Donna, you are so wise. We all do better when we go with the flow.

  • Karen Kramer McGinn7/28/2010

    Inspiring and some great advice on life too!

  • Susan Jane7/28/2010

    Amazing.

  • Joey7/28/2010

    Very nice poetry, Donna. Thank you.

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