The Rose

Tye Martin
Her long slender body alluringly tilts over to kiss the sunlight. She then blushes an even deeper exquisite, rich sultry red bringing even more attention to her. They gaze upon her beauty from afar wondering how she is so blessed to be graced with such a gorgeous creative flow from God. Perhaps she was hand in hand with him before the foundation of time, for her movements are of a melody that composes music before the winds. So the onlookers become perplexed in a trance of astonishment, wondering how she found and obtained so much favor in creation.

The queen of the garden, but placed in her position by envious hearts who must gaze upon her stature for it reigns far above all others, annihilating the competition. Her stem impressively tall, and sternly elegant. Her petals thick, plush and full like lips that have just been glossed. They softly speak, kiss me........if you dare, touch me...... if you dare, and if you must, please be aware that i might sting, for I am bedazzling but yet still a woman.

Published by Tye Martin

I am whatever I am called to be at whatever given time, for I am the representative of my creator.  View profile

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  • mayka10/17/2008

    Very very beautiful

  • 3lilangels3/20/2008

    Wow this was really beautiful, great poem!!

  • Harry Gunawan1/30/2008

    Great allegory.. again! You're awesome Tye! :-)

  • Mike1/30/2008

    Hi Tye. I'm at the library so you don't get to see me! Just keep up those warm-weather topics. Our wind last night was so frigid and gusting that some people had all four car doors frozen shut. But you just keep enjoying yourself, Tye.

  • ALBAN MEHLING1/29/2008

    There is a special rose in your life, I can tell. Thank You fer sharin'. Mizpah. ;-}}>

  • IcyCucky1/29/2008

    Very pretty, Tye

  • Coffee Mugg1/28/2008

    I was giving you a comment when it turned into a little poem, so had to change what was written,
    It's about a woman being scorned. Good Job Tye . Ken

  • Kim Linton1/28/2008

    Very beautiful!

  • Lisa Renee.1/28/2008

    Really cool..that describes women well. Nice work.

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