The Searcher

Susan Elliott
A solitary star fell from the sky
with hopes to be caught
in the glimpse of an eye
by a single child.

The child that caught it
made a wish.
Sounding small and feeble
in the still night.

Not knowing exactly
how the wish would be granted
he raised his head
his feet firmly planted.

Waiting for hours
for his wish to fall from the sky
he bowed his head
and started to cry.

But, knowing for wishing
he'd gotten quite far
he realized that dreams
don't fall from the stars.

He promised himself
to work extra hard
and reach for his goals
because of one falling star.

Published by Susan Elliott

Susan Elliott's poetry has appeared in both print and online formats. Susan has recently published her first two Kindle books: Wandering Through a Barely Functional Mind and Ink Blots on Paper.  View profile

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  • Ruth Carter2/8/2010

    Absolutely lovely!

  • Paul Rance2/8/2010

    Magical.

  • william2/8/2010

    awe sue, very nice,
    creative for age 9, well done xx

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