Stands an old wooden shack
If the little building could talk
Its history would take you back
It saw a lot of deaths and a lot of births too
It once was a lovely place
Back when it was new
The little shack is now falling apart and no one seems to care
It stands alone with weeds all around
It seems so sad and lonely and a frown it seems to wear
You see this little shack once had a lovely family to maintain rugged beauty
But they have long since passed
So there is none to do the duty
One day the little shack will be gone
Decay will take its toil
It will be over and done
Just a heap of wood atop the soil
Published by lori beeler
I am 40 years old and married with a 5 year old little boy. I have enjoyed writing for many years now. My favorite things are reading the Bible and having fun with my family. View profile
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3 Comments
Post a Commentbeautiful write!
This is beautiful! Wonderfully written poem...
Nice poem. The structure just falls apart once the love that held it together passes on.