The Sickness of Kari

Tricks on the Stroll

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With tricks on the stroll

The king pin of the city,

T-bird was sadistic.

He liked to pimp whip with hangers

The king pin of the city's

Tricks were in check because

He liked to pimp whip with hangers

Sometimes they proved lethal

Tricks were in check because

They saw him ice Blue Chip

Because she didn't have his cash

Fear was how he motivated

They saw him ice Blue Chip

She was the main trick

Because she didn't have his cash

A debt she paid with her life

She was the main trick

Once upon a time a sweet girl

A debt she paid with her life

Kari was the trauma nurse on duty

Once upon a time a sweet girl

Blue Chip's end was tragic

Kari was the trauma nurse on duty

Situations like this made her sick

Blue Chip's end was tragic

She lay in the morgue

Situations like this made her sick

Vengeance would best be served chilly

She lay in the morgue

T-bird was sadistic

And needed to be executed

For having tricks on the stroll

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  • Harry Gunawan1/23/2008

    O yes, tThat line really strike!. A great prequel to make things even clearer! You should listen to Kady! :-D

  • Lisa Renee.1/11/2008

    I enjoyed this...well done. PS- you should listen to Kady...

  • Kady and Tony Burney1/11/2008

    "Vengeance would be best served chilly..." That is absolutely brilliant. That is ABSOLUTELY brilliant!

  • Frank J1/11/2008

    good job liked this best

  • Kady and Tony Burney1/11/2008

    I meant to say to please put Kari, Blue Chip, and T-Bird into a book. I really believe you ought to consider this. And I wish I could rate more than 5. It seems so pointless to only rate 5, when my opinion is more than 5. Anyway, congratulations on yet another mind-boggling, soul-blasting, trippy piece of wonderful art!!!!!!

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