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  • Mary Naylor1/5/2008

    Thought provoking!

  • Katy Berezny1/5/2008

    Very nice mike

  • Lisa Renee.1/5/2008

    I love the way that you have woven this poem....I had to read it a couple of times to let it really soak in...very ingenius.

  • Blade1/4/2008

    This is the kind of stuff that fills my head every day, I just cant get it out and you have mastered a way.

  • Veronica Davidson1/4/2008

    APPLAUSE ! Will you write one for the Realist?

  • Steven West1/3/2008

    True intelligence may be rare, but the art of spinning a creative poem lives on. Very nicely done.

  • Kady Burney1/3/2008

    5 outta 5!!!!!! WOW!!!! POWERFUL!!!!!!

  • Kady Burney1/3/2008

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is by far your best and my favorite!!!!Don't get me wrong, Mike, your other art is GREAT, but this blew me away!!!!!!!! WOWEEEEE!!!!!!!!! Gosh, I really love this because it is so true!!!!! The first two lines ( and all the rest) are so powerful!!!!!! This is a power poem and a power thought!!!!! GREAT JOB ON THIS!!!!!!!

  • Nikki1/3/2008

    I love the last line :0)

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