The Tale of My Pink Bellbottoms and Strawberries -- Challenge Poem for National Poetry Month

Sheri Fresonke Harper
My mom could sew clothes better than most.
She made our clothes to be up to date and stylish.
But the pink bellbottoms she made me, made me the roast,
of all of my friends as too cutesy and childish.

So what happens to pants too cutesy for words,
I wore them when working in the strawberry fields.
Pink doesn't last long in mud up to knees,
or squashing down berries out of my yield.

True revenge on my mother I accomplished this way,
but I forgot one thing and that was her say,
"You aren't ruining another pair of pants,
you'll wear them to the fields as long as they last".

Ouch, nothing is worse than too cutesy for words,
except wearing pants cutesy and stained for the worse
but even with stains the pants never bored
no pants at all would be worse than the worst of the worse.

This poem is a quatrain poem, one with four lines and rhymed, all though I switch the rhyme order of the third stanza to signal a change. Written for April's National Poetry Month.

Published by Sheri Fresonke Harper

Sheri works as a freelance writer, novelist and poet. She worked in the aviation industry at the Port of Seattle and Boeing Company for 20 years as a systems analyst/architect where she edited and wrote over...   View profile

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  • C. Jeanne Heida 5/7/2009

    loved this!

  • Thomas J McCabe 4/22/2009

    Very good work, Sheri. Now, I want to eat strawberries.

  • 3lilangels 4/22/2009

    so cute!

  • Carol Roach 4/21/2009

    how cute but I loved my bell bottoms they were the rage

  • Momie Tullottes 4/21/2009

    Great job! :-)

  • Christine Bruness 4/21/2009

    Original for sure!

  • Carlos Cabezas Lopez 4/21/2009

    Great poem

  • mayka 4/20/2009

    Very cutesy

  • Keoni Paakaula-Cox 4/20/2009

    I love it! =)

  • Patricia Sicilia 4/20/2009

    I remember "dorky" clothes my mother made us wear. Only thing was, we didn't KNOW they were dorky back then because EVERYBODY wore those stretch pants- striped top things from Sears! :)

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