The Time I Saw My Father Cry

Who Knew the Way to My Heart?

Dan Reveal
Who knew the way to my heart better than you,
in those early days of survival, when life found its purpose in our baby's first shoe?
Let others suspect what they will about the rosary garland dinnertime fare,
for you will always know the truth, you will always care.

"I've bought you the Christmas tree and everything,"
my mother said, during the country folk prime time show.
"I will gladly spoon feed you the same love
that I fed to you not so long ago."

But I still think it was the time I saw my father cry,
that it all began to make more sense.
No more ragtime humdrum nonsense is ever needed,
once you've learned to escape the need for pretense.

So you should find it so easy to forgive me,
because I love you more than you may ever know.
Instead of blaming God for my human weakness,
I should be content to watch our children grow.

Instead of blaming God for my human weakness,
I should be content to watch our children grow.

But I still think it was the time I saw my father cry,
that it all began to make more sense.
No more ragtime humdrum nonsense is ever needed,
once you've learned to escape the need for pretense.

[Picture courtesy of Mike Oberg]

Published by Dan Reveal

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  • Theresa Wiza12/24/2010

    This was such a tender, moving expression of your love for your father, as beautiful as Mike Oberg's flower.

  • Bridgitte Williams12/16/2010

    ps I never ever saw my dad cry. This one really moves me. Well done!

  • Bridgitte Williams12/16/2010

    Beautiful and so touching. :-) Bravo.

  • Linda Louise Johnson12/13/2010

    Even the title is a poem!

  • Kristie Leong M.D.12/9/2010

    Very touching.

  • Tonya Hillukka12/9/2010

    Wow. Great job :)

  • Zona Zirconia12/8/2010

    Beautiful words and sad meaning:) Thanks for the lovely poem/song.

  • John Myers12/6/2010

    This is wonderful Dan, my friend!

  • rama devi nina12/6/2010

    Very touching. Bravo.:)

  • Kim Smith12/6/2010

    Moving!!

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