The Wicked Bike

Phantom Phoenix

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Phantom Phoenix was Kari's ride

She was a skilled biker

Astride the mean machine

Doing dauntless moves

She was a skilled biker

Riding like the divine wind

Doing dauntless moves

Was how she kept Sablehair sharp

Riding like the divine wind

Her black locks elegant

Was how she kept Sablehair sharp

Sporting the hell out of beautiful

Her black locks elegant

She rocked purple leather everything

Sporting the hell out of beautiful

Literally stopping traffic

She rocked purple leather everything

Sex on wheels

Literally stopping traffic

Straddling the wicked bike

Sex on wheels

Astride the mean machine

Hurtling through the urban night

Phantom Phoenix was Kari's ride

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  • Harry Gunawan1/23/2008

    Phantom Phoenix, that's one hell a great ride!! Villains, beware!!

  • Lisa Renee.1/14/2008

    Again...great characters...great writing!

  • Kady and Tony Burney1/13/2008

    "Rocked purple leather"......"Hurtling through the urban night..."......"divine wind..." This, Kevin, is what they call art. And these are what I would call some of my favorite parts of your poem. I love the way "urban night" sounds. Urban night....WOW.... great job!!!!!

  • Kady and Tony Burney1/13/2008

    Your little Kuniochi and all her conquests, friends, and adventures are simply better than any movie, book, or tv show. I'm really loving these vibes and hope you continue. She's become almost a daily ritual of mine, just to see what she is up to! Congrats!!!!

  • Kady and Tony Burney1/13/2008

    YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! Kevin, my dear heart, these just keep getting better and better and better and better!!!!! I do so hope and pray that you will put Kari, T-Bird, Phantom Phoenix, and everyone else into a book! You really should consider this, because no joke...THIS IS GOOD STUFF!!!! I can actually see Kari getting a ride with Phantom Phoenix sweeping the cruelty off the streets with their amazing swords and words and skills!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOWEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! I am such a fan of this. I really am. Everytime I see a new poem, I always wonder what else you can come up with and you always shock and amaze me with your talent. You are such a talented writer and I am pleased to say that I HUNT almost daily (when not working or practicing the guitar) for your artwork! I can actually visualize these two awesome characters and how they BREEEEZE through the night on a MAD BIKE!!!!! I'm loving it tons, and yet again, Kevin, you've really got it. You really do. You little Kuniochi

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