The ZaniLa Rhyme

Virginia Gaces
The Clouds of Success

There you are, within my sight - afloat,
a mist, a soft miasma.

Glinting in a golden hue - rising,
a glorious vestige of a blue aura.

The mist grew tangible and formed,
a self-confident man.
Rising in a golden hue-glinting;
Fulfilled, successful in such short span.

Go forth, and search for your Holy Grail
a fervent wish I offer;
a golden hue, glinting and rising;
The challenges, for sure you'll conquer!

Published by Virginia Gaces

I am an allied health professional who is also an academician. I have an interest in writing and had some works published in a few local magazines. I am writing my first novel and hope to be able to p...   View profile

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  • Virginia Gaces 6/8/2009

    Hi Zorlone,

    Thanks for the generous words. I try to be a great poet-like you!

  • Zorlone 6/8/2009

    Lovely poem as always jena!

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