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  • Paul Rance3/10/2010

    You should write more haikus, Maria. I'm not being a creep by saying that. You've VERY good at this poetical form.

  • Heather Carreiro1/22/2010

    Great description

  • Paul Rance1/17/2010

    God, I'm trying to find new stuff to comment on! You should do more haikus, Maria. Easy to knock out, and you're good at 'em!

  • Loraine Alkire1/5/2010

    I like your Haiku! Pity, it made the pity pot. But I imagine you've got more than 30 views on it now:)

  • Nancy Miller1/5/2010

    Here's another pity page view! But I actually liked your "Then" but "When" was "Then"?

  • Bethany Marsh1/4/2010

    I want some pity page views also!! LOL ... Cute reminiscent haiku. : )

  • Kim Keason1/4/2010

    Is there a complementary "Now" haiku to go with this?

  • Ali Canary1/4/2010

    Aw, I can picture you now, you adorable moppet!

  • ADSpencer1/4/2010

    I like it, sort of like a short collection of moments combined into a few words apiece. Nice job :D

  • Paul Rance1/4/2010

    I like this surreal haiku.

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