There's a Side of Me

Don't Take Her Away

Dan Reveal
Was there such a thing as an ashes to ashes love,
when you were content to dismantle the iron wheel?
You didn't have to run after the department store merchandise glove--
your picnic protest assemblies had made you the queen of surreal.

And in the bus station celebrity magazine pick up spot,
I was so sad to eat my blueberry pie alone.
Friends are just like compassionate angels
that let your Saturday night movie time answers be shone.

Still, there's a side of me that just wants to be happy,
and that wants others to be happy as well.
Don't take her away--she's pretty,
as long as I fall into another jack 'o lantern fire moon spell.

Don't waste any time hiding in your closet,
when those splintered fingers can be kissed away.
Because I loved, you could tell me the lie and I bought it.
Dear woman don't go astray.

Because I loved, you could tell me the lie and I bought it.
Dear woman don't go astray.

Still, there's a side of me that just wants to be happy,
and that wants others to be happy as well.
Don't take her away--she's pretty,
as long as I fall into another jack 'o lantern fire moon spell.

{For the Inner Circle, and for Everyone}

[Picture courtesy of Mike Oberg]

Published by Dan Reveal

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  • Tiffany Booth1/25/2011

    Excellent work! Thanks for sharing =0)

  • Bridgitte Williams12/24/2010

    Loved!! :-) Well done. Yes, happiness should always prevail. Always.

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky12/3/2010

    Just excellent!

  • Danielle Olivia Tefft11/29/2010

    Powerful and wonderful at once!

  • Judy Kaelin11/29/2010

    Lovely, Dan!

  • Crystal Ray11/28/2010

    Nice job! :)

  • John Myers11/28/2010

    Wonderful work Dan!

  • Jeanne Baney11/27/2010

    Wonderful! Such a romantic!

  • Sandy James11/27/2010

    Very nice, Dan.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.11/27/2010

    What a master of poetry you are, Dan. Wonderful.

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