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Celebrating Dirt (as Children Do so Well, with All Their Senses)

Deonils

boys wait ... mom's in line --

sand: they feel it, throw, unite --

when will they say "dirt"?

Published by Deonils

I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

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  • Tina Twito8/10/2009

    I love this one!

  • Angel Vee8/10/2009

    How fun, love it!!!

  • John Smither8/7/2009

    Good haiku.

  • Pat Burroughs8/7/2009

    Very deep! And dirty. (:>))

  • Branwen668/7/2009

    Love the way your poetry zooms in onto all those little details and reveals some truth hidden in them. Thanks! :)

  • Greenhill8/7/2009

    dirt. how fun!

  • Linda Louise Johnson8/6/2009

    Dirt, wonderful dirt! Nifty haiku,thanks. And thanks for all your fun comments on articles.

  • Janet Hunt8/6/2009

    Such fun, very nice!

  • Roberta Baxter8/6/2009

    Children of all ages like dirt! I still do.I am a gardener.

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