Tick

Tina Twito
What terrifies
does not need claws
or fangs.

It doesn't always
come with screams
or pools of blood.

Sometimes
what stops the heart
is something small:

a shadow,
or a skittter,
or a scratch.

Or in a dark
and sleeping house
you hear a tiny tick

and realize
that you don't have

a

clock.

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Tina Twito9/15/2009

    Thanks! Interesting comment Walton:)

  • RipDiction9/11/2009

    Oh, nice that for some reason was just eerie, great job on the ending loved it!

  • Tina Twito9/10/2009

    Thanks all, I had fun with this one. And Charlotte I don't blame you! (You know I though of that when I titled it, JL!)

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky9/10/2009

    Excellent. By the way, I'm deathly afraid of ticks - - the real ones.

  • Shaheen Darr9/10/2009

    that was brilliant!

  • Shethy Stuckey9/10/2009

    Very good Tina So very very good.

  • Softdiamond9/10/2009

    Hah! What was that?haha...creepy again...

  • Sharon Pfohl9/10/2009

    I was thinking how I jump when someone walks up behind me and says hello. Then I was hit with "the clock"! That was great!

  • J L Carey Jr9/9/2009

    When I read the title I thought it was going to be about the big blue guy so I was pleasantly surprised. &)

  • Branwen669/9/2009

    OMG!!!! This was all cute and fun and then "no clock"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW! Genuinely creepy! PERFECT!

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