To a Soldier's Widow

An Offering in Villanelle Poetry Form

Gerald Wescott

To a Soldier's Widow

Her brush, a feather borne of wind and fiery rain,
cries aloud when news of loss is come, and
describes the flight of grace midst dreadful pain.

He, a soldier, dies a hero's death on foreign plain,
she, a prisoner of familiar unfamiliar land
Her brush, a feather borne of wind and fiery rain,

Smudges grey and gloom and casts an artless stain.
And looking up, her soul, to catch his hand,
describes the flight of grace midst dreadful pain.

A coffin comes, with wishing words, and all that can remain
is memory that paints in gold two golden wedding bands,
Her brush, a feather borne of wind and fiery rain,

Begs the earth, "Turn on," and still her heart, as if upon a chain,
oftimes cries out, oft learns of God to understand,
describes the flight of grace midst dreadful pain.

Her greys take color, give God glory, her art again regained.
Her soldier gone, she paints his story - that flame is ever fanned,
her brush, a feather borne of wind and fiery rain,
describes the flight of grace midst dreadful pain.

Published by Gerald Wescott

Born in Massachusetts in 1952, the US Navy made me an electronic tech and eventually took me far south to Jacksonville, Florida and put me on the aircraft carrier, USS Saratoga in 1975. I only stayed a sailo...  View profile

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  • Bridgitte Williams7/19/2011

    I echo the Wow and add a BRAVO to it! :-) This is lovely and very moving. Enjoyed. You have great poetic talent. Write on!

  • Mike Simmons7/8/2011

    Wow.

  • Gerald Wescott7/7/2011

    Thank you all - now don't just steal it for your pastor, tell your friends where you found it! There's more to come.

  • Dan Parisi7/7/2011

    powerful

  • Rita Oakleaf7/6/2011

    Great, emotional poem. I have to admit, though, that at first I thought the brush was a hair brush and I was confused for a while. Then a light bulb came on and I felt dumb. Oops. :) Welcome to AC!

  • Katrina Goldbaum7/3/2011

    :) Here, here!

  • Michele Starkey7/2/2011

    We will be visiting the National Purple Heart Hall of Honor and the Cantonment. They are reading the Declaration of Independence aloud. We are forever in debt to those whose blood was shed for freedom's cause. cheers

  • Raymond Bureau7/1/2011

    So often, we forget why we even have some holidays. Enjoy the fireworks, but remember why we have them -- to honor America and those who made it happen and maintained it all these years.

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