To Wait Too Long (Poem)

Tina Twito
Inertia bound
.
till roots parch
and shrivel,
.
leaves fall
in crackling heaps,
.
branches crack
and splinter,
.
bark curls and
sloughs away,
.
and ring by ring
the knotted pillar
crumbles . . .
rotted, soft.
.
Lightning strikes
the dry stump . . .
.
one last blaze
.
to ashes.

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Deb Martin-Webster2/21/2011

    Very expressive I love it!

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky2/7/2011

    I just love your poetry.

  • Dan Reveal2/5/2011

    Wonderful writing!

  • Tal Boldo2/3/2011

    Beautiful and melancholy.

  • J L Carey Jr2/3/2011

    It's interesting how it seems to slowly decay and then suddenly it goes out in a blaze of glory. Oddly this poem parallels the situation in Egypt right now. Great piece, Tina.

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan2/1/2011

    Too long a wait indeed. It reflects itself as we go through the stages. Deep thoughts, Tina - siva

  • Bridgitte Williams2/1/2011

    Whew! :-)

  • Delicia Powers2/1/2011

    sad and haunting...

  • Martin Kloess2/1/2011

    very good

  • Martin Kloess2/1/2011

    very good

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