Too Young at Eighteen

Mag Inzire
She was too young to be married
She was too young to have a child
But how could she have known?

It was a time she had longed
For independence, not knowing that
The price to pay was way too high

Three years later, now divorced with two kids
She is still too young too know
Five years later another marriage plus one more child

Will she ever know?
Add six more years and one more seed
Now she is starting to see

Twenty years later since she asked
For independence, and the price to pay is still too high
She now knows that she will never be set free

But the choices she made have let her see
That if not for them, she couldn't be who she is
Nor what she will be

Published by Mag Inzire

Mag is a Physician Assistant working at a local community hospital in NY. Married and a mother of four she takes pride in educating on health and wellness, but also enjoys sharing real life experiences and e...  View profile

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  • Patricia Sicilia6/16/2008

    Married one month after I turned 18, I relate to this poem. While it did derail my life, it also saved it to some extent. I adore my daughter and three grandchildren. But I always wonder "what if?" Nice poem.

  • Nannette Richford4/4/2008

    I like this. Thanks.

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper4/4/2008

    Good thoughtful poem :) Sheri

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA3/31/2008

    fantastic poem, truely beautiful.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.3/31/2008

    This is very powerful and says so much in so few words. Great job!

  • Rae Lynne Morvay3/31/2008

    Very nice. I am subscribing to you.

  • Angela La Fon3/31/2008

    Lovely, profound:)

  • SFaloon3/31/2008

    So much meaning and very touching.

  • jcorn3/31/2008

    This seemed inspirational to me, especially as I read the last lines - also so movingly open and honest.

  • cathiesbloggs3/31/2008

    Very powerful words spoken here !!!....filled with real wisdom !!!!

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