Tranquility's a Garden

Walton S. Tissot
Bees
All along
Path and bower
Daffadowndilly and daisies proper
Balance

Published by Walton S. Tissot

~ Walton S. Tissot is a pseudonym of William S. Tribell - *{PLEASE FEEL FREE: Anyone who enjoys the work, to Tweet, Dig, Blog, Tell a friend or anyway otherwise share and or promote it.}* - Born in America,...  View profile

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  • J L Carey Jr4/17/2009

    I also liked "Daffadowndilly". That's writers license in action.

  • Walton S. Tissot4/17/2009

    Well that gave me a beautiful idea! As that this is a cinquain (5 line patern); I will write a Butterfly cinquain (9 line patern) ;)

  • John Smither4/17/2009

    Great writing, after the butterfly you could get a whole series going of all the gardens creatures.

  • Sandra Essary4/16/2009

    Love "daffadowndilly"!

  • Siew Cheng Hoe4/16/2009

    One poem for a bee, please write another for the butterfly

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI4/16/2009

    A wonderful poem.Brevity is the soul of wit.You have proved your wit and merit.Congratulations.

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