Trapped

Mandy Kaye

Hurt me once and I'll get you back
And so the story never ends

Spinning so dizzily around our past or else future
We're dancing in circles

Our surroundings whirling past us - as we linger
immobile
Jumping to conclusions

We're on a one way path leading us nowhere
Bouncing of the walls

Pull my strings until I come unraveled
I've heard it all before

Round and round we go
But we will never stop
Because nobody knows

Published by Mandy Kaye

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  • M.S.Medina8/14/2007

    Nice job with your poetry Mandy.

  • Matt ; )8/7/2007

    Twisted like your belly

  • M.J.8/6/2007

    i like your poem, It's like you never say what you mean,But you don't have to. The world could be what you mean spinning and hurting you forever, or a wheel or tourture that you could have taken a wrong "path" to. The point is that i like it alot and it makes me think of all kinds of possible situations.

  • Bridgitte Williams7/30/2007

    I loved this. Great poem. :-)

  • Elisa Waldron7/29/2007

    Amen sister.

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