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  • Mike Spain11/17/2008

    great poem!

  • Cathy A Montville11/8/2008

    Excellent weave of words! I am not a poet, but I take great pleasure in reading poetry!

  • MADAM BUTTERFLY10/12/2008

    I liked this. I am part native american. There are things i still do not understand and things I practice as my belief. My great grandfather, I met briefly while I was little, could not speak but little English. I adored him and I always sat in his lap and tryed to understand him. My grandmother was also Cherokee. She spoke better English. I loved listening to her storys as a child. My father is gone now but he was my hero to teach me the things I needed to know.

  • Stephen Joltin10/6/2008

    When I see a crow, he seems to stare at me. His "caw" seems to say something to me which I can almost but not quite understand. Not many people know they can be taught to talk like a parrot. Then they take wing and are gone forever following their own calling. - Great poem!!!

  • Smorg10/1/2008

    O man, at least no vultures this year, ay? ;o) You've got the gift for the pictorial, matie. You make me see things just reading the words!

  • Orchiolum10/1/2008

    Good read.

  • Secretsides10/1/2008

    I really liked this. It reminded me of an article in National Geographics about the intelligence of animals even crows, maybe not a raven but pretty dang close! great poetry

  • 3lilangels9/30/2008

    Enjoyed this!!

  • jcorn9/29/2008

    Excellent , loved it!

  • marindavid9/28/2008

    Well done. The Trickster smiles!

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