Tsunami 3/11/11

Tina Twito
Butter scraped from toast:
houses, fields, and lives gnashed down,
swallowed by the sea.

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Bethany R. Marsh3/26/2011

    Great job.

  • J L Carey Jr3/13/2011

    Using the haiku format was appropriate. Great analogy, "Butter scraped from toast". I thought the date was both curious and disturbing, if you follow the 11 - 11 phenomena.

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky3/11/2011

    well done.

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