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  • R.C. Johnson12/1/2009

    I thought the contest was great fun, and hope to participate in the next one whenever that will be! Enjoyed yours very much.

  • Tracie Walker11/23/2009

    Awww... sad. Gonna eat it anyway though.

  • Phillip Tobias11/22/2009

    Those pilgrims....

  • Victoria Rowden11/21/2009

    Aw, this one made me a bit sad...

  • Lynn Pritchett11/21/2009

    Ouch!

  • Sherry W11/21/2009

    Yikes! Tweeting....

  • Stephanie Durden Edwards11/21/2009

    Says a lot in just 17 syllables! Nice job!

  • Kay Whittenhauer11/21/2009

    Oooh- that was really good! Sort of a surprise ending! Good luck!

  • Dave Schrader11/20/2009

    That last line really cuts! :)

  • Nancy Tracy11/20/2009

    Beautifully written... the word "axe" is so onomatopoeic!

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