Twinkle Twinkle - the Altered Rhyme

An Altered Nursery Rhyme for ArtMe

Teresa Mahieu
Artme is such a wonderful poet and does a great job entertining us with her altered nursery rhymes here on AC....
So I thought I would alter a rhyme for her.

twinkle twinkle little star
are you near or are you far,
do you shine upon the night
to guide me till dawn's first light,
and when the day is shining bright,
twinkle twinkle little star
how i wonder where you are.

Published by Teresa Mahieu

I've now hit 50 and am married with two grown daughters and 1 granddaughter. We live with 3 cats. I enjoy most forms of art, crafting, photography and poetry. I am a Cub Scout Leader and a Boy Scout volun...  View profile

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  • S. A.10/28/2008

    That's a really cute poem. I almost like yours better than the original...lol.

  • C.B. Jones9/24/2008

    Niiiice. In my opinion, these lyrics should be used in place of the current ones.

  • Sheryl Young9/23/2008

    Cool! Nice picture, too.

  • Carol Roach9/22/2008

    nice little poem

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