Unconditional Love

Shirley A Mandel
He lifted his
starry colored head,
and with double deep creases
crossing his face
he asked the neighbor
to watch out for his alcoholic son.
Watch the hall for intruders, he said,
for often he's unconscious
and doesn't lock the door.
And call me collect
if he's sick,
for sometimes he doesn't
open the door for me.
Money is no object.
Money is no problem.
My, quipped the neighbor,
isn't he a lucky man
to have a father who loves his son.
No. No, replied the man,
I am the lucky one.

Published by Shirley A Mandel

Shirley A. Mandel is an award winning poet and the author of two books.. In addition to being a writer, Shirley Ann is a Vietnam vintage veteran and served her fellow veterans in the VA medical system as...  View profile

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  • Mindy Mai9/8/2011

    That's very touching. Beautiful poem :)

  • Typing for Food6/1/2009

    Congratulations and Wow, Wow, Wow! Nicely done.

  • Krista Lynn Hughes5/27/2009

    This is a very touching poem. CONGRATS on your award. :-)

  • Kofi Bofah5/26/2009

    Congratulations on your award.

  • Christine Zibas5/26/2009

    Very touching. If only all family members had such compassion for their loved ones, the world would be a better place.

  • Nikki5/20/2009

    Congratulations on the award, it was most deserved!

  • Ana Maria Alvarez5/19/2009

    Great poem, very touching. Makes me feel a bit like a coward. The words were honest and true. Thank you!

  • Jennifer Waite5/17/2009

    This is beautiful. The whole tale was wonderfully captivating, and that last line did what it was supposed to...truly. Thanks for sharing this, and congratulations :-)

  • Siew Cheng Hoe5/15/2009

    very touching

  • Kassidy Emmerson5/14/2009

    Congratulations on the well-deserved award!

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