Upside Down and Confused Part 2

Coffee Mugg

We have to pursue.
Something
A love our love
Made in the heavens above
You know this true
You have my love
How to make you mine
What to do
I wonder I ponder
Bodies intertwined
I think of you
I close my eyes.

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I am a 60 year old male, born and raised in Alabama. Have been in construction most of adult life, and had lived in Orlando Fl for over 30 years. Have now come back to Alabama. Could be considered an expert...  View profile

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  • Linda Ann Nickerson2/3/2008

    This is cool writing . . . because hearts truly can turn folks upside down and inside out and sideways.

  • Lisa Renee.2/3/2008

    Mike is right...this is amazing!

  • MIKE2/3/2008

    HEY KEN, TRY THIS ONE STARTING WITH THE FIRST LINE AND SKIP EVERY OTHER ONE GOING DOWN--IT WORKS TOO!!!!! HEY KEN, AND SO DOES THE 2ND ONE STARTING WITH "SOMETHING" AND THEN EVERY OTHER ONE GOING DOWN!!! NOW THAT'S FREAKY!!! YOUR A FREAKIN GENIUS!!!! THIS POEM KICKS ASS!!!

  • Coffee Mugg2/3/2008

    I am going to have to try this with other poems. Never thought about rewriting them upside. Thanks Mike

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