Valley of Loneliness

Mary  E. Coe
Gather 'round all you young lovers
While I tell a true story of love
Love can be fun, and oh, so wonderful
Until you have lost the one you love

When your love one finds another
And you're left standing all alone
Your heart will grieve, I know, dear young one
Because, I have loved so hard and lost

And when you have lost your loved one
You'll cry a tear for him each day
When your tears have all been shed
You will just sit around and sigh

Then, you will enter the valley of loneliness
Pain, inside, too hard, to cry
Your heart will grieve, I know dear young one
For, I have loved so hard and lost

There, I stood at the door of emptiness
Oh, the pain, unbearable, inside
I ran wild, just to keep my sanity
Wild life couldn't heal the pain inside

Then, I entered the valley of loneliness
Hurt and pain built up inside
My heart did grieve, it grieved, dear young one,
Because, I have loved so hard and lost.

You must exit this valley of loneliness
Don't hold on to pain inside
Do not open that door to emptiness
A better life awaits you outside.

Published by Mary E. Coe

I write articles, songs, poetry, short stories and stageplays. Some of my writings are fictitious and some are fact based. In the Spring of 1993, some of my poems were published in the library at Citrus Col...  View profile

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  • J P Whickson3/26/2008

    What a wonderful poem for someone who's grieving. I shall book mark it and hope I don't need to reread it anytime soon.

  • Lonnette Harrell3/3/2008

    Just a beautiful and poignanat way to express the loneliness we all sometimes experience at the end of a relationship, and the hope we have that life will be better. Wonderful!

  • 3lilangels2/14/2008

    wow absoultely amazing poem such a beautiful way of saying what you feel. this was so enjoyable to read!!!!

  • Kassidy Emmerson1/28/2008

    You said it so beautifully, Mary! Such a talent!

  • Lonnette Harrell1/20/2008

    Expresses the feelings of lost love so powerfully! Excellent!

  • ValentinesDayIsComing1/16/2008

    Beautiful Poem Mary. Gorgeous. I cannot wait to see what you write next. ;)

  • Momie Tullottes1/13/2008

    I love this! Excellent! :-)

  • Kay Whittenhauer1/12/2008

    Outstanding! This would make a great song!

  • Linda Ann Nickerson1/12/2008

    The journey begins . . . looking forward to more!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA1/12/2008

    very nice, sooooo heart felt.

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